Buttttt to comment on said above excerpt of story - you know what's weird? Even though Juju and Richmond are not as developed in this, (and don't seem to be totally and completely in love yet) Soph seems to stand out a lot more. Atleast, her character comes across more than it did sometimes in your Nano.
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Date: 2008-12-13 03:01 am (UTC)Buttttt to comment on said above excerpt of story - you know what's weird? Even though Juju and Richmond are not as developed in this, (and don't seem to be totally and completely in love yet) Soph seems to stand out a lot more. Atleast, her character comes across more than it did sometimes in your Nano.
ANNNDDDDD yeah. ;D
MERLIN TOMORROW. Except I have to work. D;